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Nick n Judy

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Im getting crazy about collaborations and this movie...

collab with Tushfa

www.furaffinity.net/view/19053… <- sketch!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

First thing that caught my eye was Nick's thigh. Very chicken like. Especially when I start tracing it from the toes and ankle to the knee that don't change in thickness then the thigh really stands out too much. Also the feet could be shorter just a tiny bit. Even though all the bends are correct they almost look like digitgrade legs and he is flat footed in the movie.
Hands (Paws)- he's got 4 fingers, not 5. The paw looks overly big proportionally to Judy's body. Also just noticing is there a boob he's squeezing inbetween? lol. I think Nick's arm is a bit thin too. In fact it looks like it thins out in between shoulder and elbow. Ok these are the major proportional issues I personally find. Any more than that is just nitpicking. Not sure what Judy's right arm is doing. Maybe place it under her left one? Also a different color underwear for Judy. Blue on blue is hard to tell apart.